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She left with beauty and pride and with tragic goodbyes that lingered a moment before the wind carried them away and for days she went, without hesitation, and without mistake and not a single seed of doubt was planted in her peoples minds and perhaps it was this feeling of infallibility, that caused her defeat, for her peoples faith had been her destruction and as the realization of how wrong they had been began to sink in the music played on and while the haunting cries for mercy were heard and the whispers of childrens stories were told calmly in the midst of chaos the music played on until the last ragged breath of thousands was let out in a broken shudder the music played on, and on, until it was only an echo.
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 12:51 PM UTC
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She left with beauty and pride and with tragic goodbyes that lingered a moment before the wind carried them away and for days she went, without hesitation, and without mistake and not a single seed of doubt was planted in her peoples minds and perhaps it was this feeling of infallibility, that caused her defeat, for her peoples faith had been her destruction and as the realization of how wrong they had been began to sink in the music played on and while the haunting cries for mercy were heard and the whispers of childrens stories were told calmly in the midst of chaos the music played on until the last ragged breath of thousands was let out in a broken shudder the music played on, and on, until it was only an echo.
oliviah-rachael
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 12:51 PM UTC
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