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He sprinkles this sugar on the world Trying to make it a little bit sweeter. Our response suggests he succeeds. Each grain spinning like a hurricane, Frozen droplets floating towards the earth Until they kiss the frozen ground. Confusion, as they aimlessly drift through the air. Billions build up and coat the world In a blanket of peace, hope and wild dreams. Hugged plants are squeezed a new colour, Rooftops too, are repainted white. The bitter cold troubles no one. This frozen sweetness engulfs the land, And perfection is amongst a youthful world. Perfection that thrives in the luminous dark. But, nightfall slowly realises our fears, And when weary eyes awaken to the morning sun, All of Earths hopes and dreams Have started to melt away.
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Feb 14, 2011
Feb 14, 2011 at 12:16 PM UTC
A Childhood Delight
He sprinkles this sugar on the world Trying to make it a little bit sweeter. Our response suggests he succeeds. Each grain spinning like a hurricane, Frozen droplets floating towards the earth Until they kiss the frozen ground. Confusion, as they aimlessly drift through the air. Billions build up and coat the world In a blanket of peace, hope and wild dreams. Hugged plants are squeezed a new colour, Rooftops too, are repainted white. The bitter cold troubles no one. This frozen sweetness engulfs the land, And perfection is amongst a youthful world. Perfection that thrives in the luminous dark. But, nightfall slowly realises our fears, And when weary eyes awaken to the morning sun, All of Earths hopes and dreams Have started to melt away.
Comments please! Not too happy with this one
thomas-newlove
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Feb 14, 2011
Feb 14, 2011 at 12:16 PM UTC
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