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Sent to prison for killing Autumn, I made the same mistake last year, Each bar an icy steel column, Separating me from summers cheer. My feet are numb, my fingers frozen, Kept from the world in my frosty pen. I reflect on the lonesome path I’ve chosen, But know I will do the same again. This prison is hell, chilled to the bone. The warden called Weather is rather glum, Winter does that to a man starved of home, Its freezing walls are fast to benumb. I beg for pardon of my crime, I feel remorse and true dismay. I am defrosted just in time, To be released on Christmas Day. I reflect on Winter’s release of me, And wonder what the future will bring? The gloom defrosts inside of me, As my heart is warmed by emerging Spring.
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Feb 14, 2011
Feb 14, 2011 at 12:12 PM UTC
Trapped in Winter
Sent to prison for killing Autumn, I made the same mistake last year, Each bar an icy steel column, Separating me from summers cheer. My feet are numb, my fingers frozen, Kept from the world in my frosty pen. I reflect on the lonesome path I’ve chosen, But know I will do the same again. This prison is hell, chilled to the bone. The warden called Weather is rather glum, Winter does that to a man starved of home, Its freezing walls are fast to benumb. I beg for pardon of my crime, I feel remorse and true dismay. I am defrosted just in time, To be released on Christmas Day. I reflect on Winter’s release of me, And wonder what the future will bring? The gloom defrosts inside of me, As my heart is warmed by emerging Spring.
I'd love to hear thoughts on this because I am not satisfied wth it!
thomas-newlove
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26/M/English
Feb 14, 2011
Feb 14, 2011 at 12:12 PM UTC
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