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in this intangible world i wander (wording daringly a make believe voice trying the allure of poetry) and come across depicted landscapes heartfulled universes in this intangible world i wander yet in the ending day i look for this velvet red with a deeply lasting bouquet of life exhortation in your poetry as in the portuguese red wine you like and i seat back dreamy wrapped in this sense of fulfilment smiling at a giant kneeling to a child with dawn syndrome a constructeur of love abdicating judgement and prejudgement crying alone for anger drainage finding plenitude in a woman with his height escalating an iced mountain travelling ages in the winged tree that waves by the window considering far in the height the ways of the worlderly life in this intangible world i wander with your poetry echoing and wondered i understand how a heart grows humanity and it feels like crying to believe in the tangibility of love
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Nov 26, 2014
Nov 26, 2014 at 6:34 PM UTC
Dear Sverre
in this intangible world i wander (wording daringly a make believe voice trying the allure of poetry) and come across depicted landscapes heartfulled universes in this intangible world i wander yet in the ending day i look for this velvet red with a deeply lasting bouquet of life exhortation in your poetry as in the portuguese red wine you like and i seat back dreamy wrapped in this sense of fulfilment smiling at a giant kneeling to a child with dawn syndrome a constructeur of love abdicating judgement and prejudgement crying alone for anger drainage finding plenitude in a woman with his height escalating an iced mountain travelling ages in the winged tree that waves by the window considering far in the height the ways of the worlderly life in this intangible world i wander with your poetry echoing and wondered i understand how a heart grows humanity and it feels like crying to believe in the tangibility of love
I do not mean to disrespect the challenge but, in its spirit, i intend to also express gratitude for the fulfilling poetry written by those we follow in a regular way. This is my humble way to express it to a poet i admire in so different levels. Do visit his page: http://hellopoetry.com/sverre-g-holter/
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Nov 26, 2014
Nov 26, 2014 at 6:34 PM UTC
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