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You took me to odd places My own mind was one of them From our first conversation To the first time we hung out I knew it would be different I just can’t help shaking this feeling The heart wants what the heart wants And I am going to be positive about this With my experiences with you I learned more about myself Than I thought I would I learned that I am brave Or at least capable of being so I learned that deep down inside I’m positive as **** I learned that you can find friends In the most unlikely places And I learned that you can always Come back from a dark place As long as you have someone to help you out Thank you for the memories They were pretty great And I hope that we make more
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Nov 22, 2014
Nov 22, 2014 at 8:09 AM UTC
My first poem about you
You took me to odd places My own mind was one of them From our first conversation To the first time we hung out I knew it would be different I just can’t help shaking this feeling The heart wants what the heart wants And I am going to be positive about this With my experiences with you I learned more about myself Than I thought I would I learned that I am brave Or at least capable of being so I learned that deep down inside I’m positive as **** I learned that you can find friends In the most unlikely places And I learned that you can always Come back from a dark place As long as you have someone to help you out Thank you for the memories They were pretty great And I hope that we make more
i rewrote "my last poem about you"
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Nov 22, 2014
Nov 22, 2014 at 8:09 AM UTC
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