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The mist was almost ethereal It floated above the silent  waters But silent was not always Peaceful, for too touch the mist Visions, Pain, Faded Limbs, as if the mist had amputated flesh, But revealed gradually upon exiting like lacerations it cut As the mist faded, I could feel but not see, Bone, Nerves, Flesh, Skin now where mist had evaporated, "Then the visions" "Hard to explain" To count the emotions, then blank, I was burning, drowning The torture with in my mind I saw each one fall, taken by the waters All that was sunk beneath All that could have been Now taken to the deep, I looked upon the waters where mist Did not creep, Revulsion, Anxiety, Sorrow For those beneath, like a tainted mirror "Trying to break free" For within each impact a wave Washed ashore, It corroded what life it touched Anger was washing upon the riverbank, "So many drowning slowly" A last breath a life time of agony Slowly those that exhaled the last, No peace as the mist was there final curse, Trapped within, souls screaming outwards, "To touch felt there pain within" "This river of the lost ones" Those who thought freedom from Pain, now suffered a lifetime within, "For the forgotten river" "Where the mist never falters" "Try to drown your sorrows" "Eternity will be the price paid" One within the waters, Eternal torment within the screaming ethereal  mists..
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Nov 22, 2014
Nov 22, 2014 at 10:58 AM UTC
The Mists Of The Forgotten River
The mist was almost ethereal It floated above the silent  waters But silent was not always Peaceful, for too touch the mist Visions, Pain, Faded Limbs, as if the mist had amputated flesh, But revealed gradually upon exiting like lacerations it cut As the mist faded, I could feel but not see, Bone, Nerves, Flesh, Skin now where mist had evaporated, "Then the visions" "Hard to explain" To count the emotions, then blank, I was burning, drowning The torture with in my mind I saw each one fall, taken by the waters All that was sunk beneath All that could have been Now taken to the deep, I looked upon the waters where mist Did not creep, Revulsion, Anxiety, Sorrow For those beneath, like a tainted mirror "Trying to break free" For within each impact a wave Washed ashore, It corroded what life it touched Anger was washing upon the riverbank, "So many drowning slowly" A last breath a life time of agony Slowly those that exhaled the last, No peace as the mist was there final curse, Trapped within, souls screaming outwards, "To touch felt there pain within" "This river of the lost ones" Those who thought freedom from Pain, now suffered a lifetime within, "For the forgotten river" "Where the mist never falters" "Try to drown your sorrows" "Eternity will be the price paid" One within the waters, Eternal torment within the screaming ethereal  mists..
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Nov 22, 2014
Nov 22, 2014 at 10:58 AM UTC
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