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You are not just a star You are the Sun My world revolves around you You light up my world You are the center of my orbit And I’m just one of your planets The closest to you I don’t mind the heat you give But, somehow it burns Especially when you look after Pluto who doesn’t even acknowledge the heat you give.
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Nov 17, 2014
Nov 17, 2014 at 5:47 AM UTC
Dear Sun, ... Love, Mercury
You are not just a star You are the Sun My world revolves around you You light up my world You are the center of my orbit And I’m just one of your planets The closest to you I don’t mind the heat you give But, somehow it burns Especially when you look after Pluto who doesn’t even acknowledge the heat you give.
kaloseira
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Nov 17, 2014
Nov 17, 2014 at 5:47 AM UTC
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