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**I      see** passion, where there was apathy playfulness, where there was tragedy beauty, where there was ugliness pacification, where there was strife acceptance, where there was rejection strength, where there was weakness elation, where there was sorrow certainty, where there was doubt honesty, where there was guile devotion, where there was neglect comfort, where there was suffering peace, where there was bitterness laughter, where there was despair affection, where there was resentment healing, where there was brokeness pleasure, where there was pain light, where there was darkness and **most            importantly** YOU, where there was emptiness
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Nov 16, 2014
Nov 16, 2014 at 9:33 AM UTC
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**I      see** passion, where there was apathy playfulness, where there was tragedy beauty, where there was ugliness pacification, where there was strife acceptance, where there was rejection strength, where there was weakness elation, where there was sorrow certainty, where there was doubt honesty, where there was guile devotion, where there was neglect comfort, where there was suffering peace, where there was bitterness laughter, where there was despair affection, where there was resentment healing, where there was brokeness pleasure, where there was pain light, where there was darkness and **most            importantly** YOU, where there was emptiness
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Nov 16, 2014
Nov 16, 2014 at 9:33 AM UTC
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