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They said he had commitment issues as he hung from the beam. Toing and froing tolling their grief. Change in his pockets and a crumpled receipt. Ticket for one, a show never seen. Pacing around him the floorboards they squeak. Flashes and flash backs, some think him weak. A life never lived and a love ever lost. The ending of his story its ultimate cost. And they said he had commitment issues, so he hung from that beam. Toing and froing, telling his grief. One way ticket, discarded seat. No place for change in his darkened genes.
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Nov 15, 2014
Nov 15, 2014 at 11:05 PM UTC
Committed
They said he had commitment issues as he hung from the beam. Toing and froing tolling their grief. Change in his pockets and a crumpled receipt. Ticket for one, a show never seen. Pacing around him the floorboards they squeak. Flashes and flash backs, some think him weak. A life never lived and a love ever lost. The ending of his story its ultimate cost. And they said he had commitment issues, so he hung from that beam. Toing and froing, telling his grief. One way ticket, discarded seat. No place for change in his darkened genes.
#commitment #depression #death #sad #love #loss
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Nov 15, 2014
Nov 15, 2014 at 11:05 PM UTC
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