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we wear grieving, like a                                       heavy cloak, with a large cowl and                      theadbare sleeves, it gives, some measure of                                      warmth, but never, quiet enough. as we stand alone, facing the winds, that howl... sad, sighing, loss. loss. complete and utter abanbdonment. ....by design or fate, leaves your heart, foresaken, your soul, ***** and                                            ravaged. meanwhile, the world                   moves on, blind to, the mad monk,         that inhabits your mind.
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Nov 8, 2014
Nov 8, 2014 at 9:33 PM UTC
malaise.....
we wear grieving, like a                                       heavy cloak, with a large cowl and                      theadbare sleeves, it gives, some measure of                                      warmth, but never, quiet enough. as we stand alone, facing the winds, that howl... sad, sighing, loss. loss. complete and utter abanbdonment. ....by design or fate, leaves your heart, foresaken, your soul, ***** and                                            ravaged. meanwhile, the world                   moves on, blind to, the mad monk,         that inhabits your mind.
a double (reversed) nonet one of series of nonets.... based on the words/concepts of lost, (loss )and found,(find) i am writing as an exercise in "compact" writing...
betterdays
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Nov 8, 2014
Nov 8, 2014 at 9:33 PM UTC
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