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my heart melted under the intensity of his glinting eyes his eyes being my flame keeping me warm being my light the moment of his attention that would soon blow away the only reason for my entirety but the light switched on he looked me in the eye yet again came so close i held my breath and he blew my candle away...
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Nov 6, 2014
Nov 6, 2014 at 5:36 AM UTC
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my heart melted under the intensity of his glinting eyes his eyes being my flame keeping me warm being my light the moment of his attention that would soon blow away the only reason for my entirety but the light switched on he looked me in the eye yet again came so close i held my breath and he blew my candle away...
My very first poem on hello poetry. Yay! greeting all other hello poetry peeps Inspired by Romeo and Juliet. Not the plot of it, but it just makes me think of vanilla scented candles hanging on chandeliers. Weird? Tell me about it...
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Nov 6, 2014
Nov 6, 2014 at 5:36 AM UTC
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