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the days subsides, with adoring colour and the racous choral, of retiring lorikeets. we sit upon the deck, cold bevvies in hand and watch the master painter at work, over on the mountain range the clouds gather. ben, laconically states, "storm tonight" and yes that smell, so wonderful, sits heavy in the twilight air. petrichor, heavy on the eucalypt, ****** beer, and warm tar.... the smells of a stormy,summer afternoon.
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Nov 6, 2014
Nov 6, 2014 at 3:47 AM UTC
storm brewing
the days subsides, with adoring colour and the racous choral, of retiring lorikeets. we sit upon the deck, cold bevvies in hand and watch the master painter at work, over on the mountain range the clouds gather. ben, laconically states, "storm tonight" and yes that smell, so wonderful, sits heavy in the twilight air. petrichor, heavy on the eucalypt, ****** beer, and warm tar.... the smells of a stormy,summer afternoon.
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Nov 6, 2014
Nov 6, 2014 at 3:47 AM UTC
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