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i know i start things in fragments or in the middle of a sentence beginning with "so" or "but" or "and" i know sometimes i leave things hanging because some nights i walk out the door still not having any poems come out of my mouth and i get in my car and just can't quite figure it out anything i write anymore is a love poem (oops) but when i look in your eyes all i can think to say is "i love you," i guess nothing too poetic yet the way you say it is what structures my poems (it's not that i don't want to speak in stanzas, but take it as a compliment that sometimes your eyes make me dizzy enough not to think straight)
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Nov 5, 2014
Nov 5, 2014 at 12:13 AM UTC
ehh this might make sense, maybe i'll delete it in the morning
i know i start things in fragments or in the middle of a sentence beginning with "so" or "but" or "and" i know sometimes i leave things hanging because some nights i walk out the door still not having any poems come out of my mouth and i get in my car and just can't quite figure it out anything i write anymore is a love poem (oops) but when i look in your eyes all i can think to say is "i love you," i guess nothing too poetic yet the way you say it is what structures my poems (it's not that i don't want to speak in stanzas, but take it as a compliment that sometimes your eyes make me dizzy enough not to think straight)
but even if i said prettier words out loud, i'd still end up writing them down anyway
molly-whateva
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Nov 5, 2014
Nov 5, 2014 at 12:13 AM UTC
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