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(                   •                        ) ~~~~~ Another lazy day of counting the dead They are everywhere                                                                               They are right HERE ///// Oh It doesn't matter much ! There's so little to say •• Ya want to cut yourself with a razor blade ? GO CUT YOURSELF WITH A  RAZOR BLADE ! your poems will get you so much praise ! for death is something to which we can all REALLY RELATE !! •• ( until it happens HERE ) • Your boyfriend left you ? HA !  YA WANTA SMASH HIS HEAD IN WITH A CONCRETE BLOCK ! WHY NOT !! ( WE ALL SYMPATHIZE AND CAN RELATE !) And he deserves it Look what he done to you !! And OUR LOVE IS FOREVER fantasies ! •• Until you see him LYING THERE ::::: Yes yes Write what you write Vent vent ! It's always alright ! Just a bunch of images and nothing more • Until the corpse is lying on the floor Right HERE •• Another day of the dead /// I tried to awake • But the only words ya said Was SHUT THE **** UP AND GO BACK TO BED /// And so I did ( but only for a little while )
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Nov 4, 2014
Nov 4, 2014 at 1:41 PM UTC
mercy ( let us beg )
(                   •                        ) ~~~~~ Another lazy day of counting the dead They are everywhere                                                                               They are right HERE ///// Oh It doesn't matter much ! There's so little to say •• Ya want to cut yourself with a razor blade ? GO CUT YOURSELF WITH A  RAZOR BLADE ! your poems will get you so much praise ! for death is something to which we can all REALLY RELATE !! •• ( until it happens HERE ) • Your boyfriend left you ? HA !  YA WANTA SMASH HIS HEAD IN WITH A CONCRETE BLOCK ! WHY NOT !! ( WE ALL SYMPATHIZE AND CAN RELATE !) And he deserves it Look what he done to you !! And OUR LOVE IS FOREVER fantasies ! •• Until you see him LYING THERE ::::: Yes yes Write what you write Vent vent ! It's always alright ! Just a bunch of images and nothing more • Until the corpse is lying on the floor Right HERE •• Another day of the dead /// I tried to awake • But the only words ya said Was SHUT THE **** UP AND GO BACK TO BED /// And so I did ( but only for a little while )
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Nov 4, 2014
Nov 4, 2014 at 1:41 PM UTC
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