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When it was time to leave (for you to go) You found me in cross-hatched darkness Stirring sugar in the smallest cup Standing on pebbles of acrylic nothing The syrup coated my cotton-pink fingers Snakes of cold air clicking along my spine Sweetness nestling into baklava layers Elbows bare and cracking How long did you watch my shoulders break? Gelatin soft bones pulled by lack of gravity Obsidian hammers pounding against my skull Negative space swirling in the sugar bowl I am only as small as I think you are You are largest when I don't know you at all I can almost feel the salt of the wind in my eyes But you've told me I lie worst when I'm all alone.
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Nov 1, 2014
Nov 1, 2014 at 5:10 PM UTC
Garden of Eden
When it was time to leave (for you to go) You found me in cross-hatched darkness Stirring sugar in the smallest cup Standing on pebbles of acrylic nothing The syrup coated my cotton-pink fingers Snakes of cold air clicking along my spine Sweetness nestling into baklava layers Elbows bare and cracking How long did you watch my shoulders break? Gelatin soft bones pulled by lack of gravity Obsidian hammers pounding against my skull Negative space swirling in the sugar bowl I am only as small as I think you are You are largest when I don't know you at all I can almost feel the salt of the wind in my eyes But you've told me I lie worst when I'm all alone.
Prompt (Jamaal May): "Include the following words/ideas: -reptile/amphibian -garage tool -the word 'pebble' -description of a texture -a non-primary color (ie cerulean, clarinet-black) -a question -the name of a foreign food" (he had waaaay too much fun with this one)
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Nov 1, 2014
Nov 1, 2014 at 5:10 PM UTC
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