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I lay upon cold steel, blinding lights loom above my head. I hear my brain confirm 'minor surgery' and then you enter the room, scalpel in hand, aimed at my chest. Not there! my mind screams, then I feel the burn of ripped flesh; a repugnant stench fills the room, a familiar smell, the sickening, salty odor of blood. Bones and cartilage moan as the scalpel shreds with swift precision, one target in mind: a fist-sized beating ***** Extraction. I raise my head from frosted steel in time to see your deed: ****** fingers, clinched into claws, dive into the open cavity, gouge holes into either side and wrench the tiny ***** from its cave. You hold it high above your head, a trophy; crimson drips down your arm, soaks a white sleeve like spilt wine on lace; you open a glass jar, formaldehyde mixes with drops of blood as the ***** plunges into your solution
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Jan 29, 2011
Jan 29, 2011 at 11:36 AM UTC
On Removing the Heart Without Anaesthesia
I lay upon cold steel, blinding lights loom above my head. I hear my brain confirm 'minor surgery' and then you enter the room, scalpel in hand, aimed at my chest. Not there! my mind screams, then I feel the burn of ripped flesh; a repugnant stench fills the room, a familiar smell, the sickening, salty odor of blood. Bones and cartilage moan as the scalpel shreds with swift precision, one target in mind: a fist-sized beating ***** Extraction. I raise my head from frosted steel in time to see your deed: ****** fingers, clinched into claws, dive into the open cavity, gouge holes into either side and wrench the tiny ***** from its cave. You hold it high above your head, a trophy; crimson drips down your arm, soaks a white sleeve like spilt wine on lace; you open a glass jar, formaldehyde mixes with drops of blood as the ***** plunges into your solution
©2K11, Lori Carlson
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Jan 29, 2011
Jan 29, 2011 at 11:36 AM UTC
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