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On the mountain pinnacle i stand, staring below at the lovely land. The sky above stands so close to my hands it seems as though i am in heaven and had attained life saving salvation I see all peace and solace, in the arms of the splendid creation of the almighty, so flawless. Having reached this far i question myself "Is this what i wanted? Is this called being successfull? Have i reached my destination? Did i overcome my fears? Did i cross over my failures?" No, i still dont get an answer. Because I am not this. I am a simple person, who loves every simple thing in life, surrounded by family and friends. The actual achievement is Being an adorable daughter, a loyal wife, a caring mother, and above all a beautiful human being. The road to actual success is still far away. But i know i have that in me, to reach my destination and achieve the true happiness in life.
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Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 9:29 AM UTC
True Achievement
On the mountain pinnacle i stand, staring below at the lovely land. The sky above stands so close to my hands it seems as though i am in heaven and had attained life saving salvation I see all peace and solace, in the arms of the splendid creation of the almighty, so flawless. Having reached this far i question myself "Is this what i wanted? Is this called being successfull? Have i reached my destination? Did i overcome my fears? Did i cross over my failures?" No, i still dont get an answer. Because I am not this. I am a simple person, who loves every simple thing in life, surrounded by family and friends. The actual achievement is Being an adorable daughter, a loyal wife, a caring mother, and above all a beautiful human being. The road to actual success is still far away. But i know i have that in me, to reach my destination and achieve the true happiness in life.
deeba
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Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 9:29 AM UTC
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