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It was just a shadow but the way it moved scared the bejeebers out of me. I was just about to put the key in the door when the big black shadow passed through me and cast itself right down the hallway …and then it was gone. It was raining and very windy and after a short sharp shake of the head I dismissed it and entered and switched on the lights – all of the lights. Hang on… How had a shadow been cast in the pitch black darkness!! I was already miserable enough I’d had a really difficult day at work Dealing politely with someone you’d call a **** Suddenly – there was a sharp rap at the door which upon opening revealed children, one, two, three, four “Trick or treat, Mister”, the young leader said at which I grinned heartily and recalling the juvenescence of earlier days I was rushed back to reality and to him I said “Trick” fully expecting and prepared for a hideous mask or something. In less time than it takes to say ‘Abracadabra’ the whole scene before me turned red I couldn’t make out at first what I was seeing but then I realised that everything, everything was red. Houses, trees, cars, even all the people were all red. Fiery red!! I was in Hell – and I was terrified. There was a long deep laugh coming from – I didn't know where. it just surrounded everything including me – what was going on? And then I remembered. “No!! Treat!!, I shouted at the top of my voice and just as suddenly as it had all appeared it vanished. “That’ll be a dollar Mister.” the youngest lad said. I gave him five dollars and closed the door and locked the door and very firmly slid the bolts home and put the chain into its slot too. I went into the study and poured myself a very large whiskey, and sat down, still shaking, in front of the fire. I had never been so scared in my life. ©Joe Wilson – Trick…definitely not a treat…2014
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Oct 26, 2014
Oct 26, 2014 at 6:51 PM UTC
Trick...definitely not a treat...
It was just a shadow but the way it moved scared the bejeebers out of me. I was just about to put the key in the door when the big black shadow passed through me and cast itself right down the hallway …and then it was gone. It was raining and very windy and after a short sharp shake of the head I dismissed it and entered and switched on the lights – all of the lights. Hang on… How had a shadow been cast in the pitch black darkness!! I was already miserable enough I’d had a really difficult day at work Dealing politely with someone you’d call a **** Suddenly – there was a sharp rap at the door which upon opening revealed children, one, two, three, four “Trick or treat, Mister”, the young leader said at which I grinned heartily and recalling the juvenescence of earlier days I was rushed back to reality and to him I said “Trick” fully expecting and prepared for a hideous mask or something. In less time than it takes to say ‘Abracadabra’ the whole scene before me turned red I couldn’t make out at first what I was seeing but then I realised that everything, everything was red. Houses, trees, cars, even all the people were all red. Fiery red!! I was in Hell – and I was terrified. There was a long deep laugh coming from – I didn't know where. it just surrounded everything including me – what was going on? And then I remembered. “No!! Treat!!, I shouted at the top of my voice and just as suddenly as it had all appeared it vanished. “That’ll be a dollar Mister.” the youngest lad said. I gave him five dollars and closed the door and locked the door and very firmly slid the bolts home and put the chain into its slot too. I went into the study and poured myself a very large whiskey, and sat down, still shaking, in front of the fire. I had never been so scared in my life. ©Joe Wilson – Trick…definitely not a treat…2014
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Oct 26, 2014
Oct 26, 2014 at 6:51 PM UTC
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