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Red reeds and a freckle of flowers bowing before rubber wheels tossing pebbles and sand and a whirlwind of dust. Their plan had caught wind and taken flight against them, like an ardent breath that leaps from battle chests that knowingly march somewhere behind the tall thick of trees. The rain won the sprint before the inky giants (stuck in the review mirror) and began to speckle the seats from the gaping sunroof, but the lovers hadn’t noticed. Their hearts beat in unison, adrenaline seemingly driving the engine. Four, bone-white knuckles chocking to hang on: one pair on the steering wheel, one on the other’s shoulder, and one on the door handle. The tires drop off and bash themselves against the stones beneath a spray of clay and water and maggots, as they swerve off the beaten path. They wade through the churning waves of grasses the wind now rushing past, splashing against their spine – their naked necks and tangled locks swimming in the invisible rapids. Their sanctuary lay before the whirlpools, deeply rooted, scarred with letters, scarred with hearts, and beautifully draped with thin weeping twigs, tied off with lace. The car’s backend swung as the tires drifted. The two men flung themselves inside the umbrella of branches, untied the lacy bows, and drew the curtains closed The willow tree would have to stand in for their officiant, for their family, their friends, their honored guests and witnesses, for they had none. They both stood in front of the tree as the wind swayed, once from behind him, and then once from behind him, all the while their tearful eyes exchanged  silent “I dos”. The one reached inside a burrow beneath the great trunk, to retrieve their rings and crowns of flowers, while the other anxiously stood watch behind him, awaiting the thunder. Gentle hands ringed their fingers with silver bands, and crowned their heads with white and blue petals, then carefully chiseled into the bark their names and their heart with a pocket knife. The two men pressed their palms to the tree to receive their blessing, and then pressed their lips together, now salty and wet, sealing their souls with a slow passionate kiss. But instead of a burst of rice freely sprinkling the atmosphere there was a burst of shotgun pellets tearing through the whispers of love and leaves. The men sprinted to the car, dodging the fires of intimidation, and drove off with their life, leaving behind the fear and shame. They turned on the heater to try to warm up. but it was long before they were dry, the rain’s echo nearly drowning out the sounds of their shared breaths.
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Oct 15, 2014
Oct 15, 2014 at 7:14 PM UTC
A Shotgun Ceremony
Red reeds and a freckle of flowers bowing before rubber wheels tossing pebbles and sand and a whirlwind of dust. Their plan had caught wind and taken flight against them, like an ardent breath that leaps from battle chests that knowingly march somewhere behind the tall thick of trees. The rain won the sprint before the inky giants (stuck in the review mirror) and began to speckle the seats from the gaping sunroof, but the lovers hadn’t noticed. Their hearts beat in unison, adrenaline seemingly driving the engine. Four, bone-white knuckles chocking to hang on: one pair on the steering wheel, one on the other’s shoulder, and one on the door handle. The tires drop off and bash themselves against the stones beneath a spray of clay and water and maggots, as they swerve off the beaten path. They wade through the churning waves of grasses the wind now rushing past, splashing against their spine – their naked necks and tangled locks swimming in the invisible rapids. Their sanctuary lay before the whirlpools, deeply rooted, scarred with letters, scarred with hearts, and beautifully draped with thin weeping twigs, tied off with lace. The car’s backend swung as the tires drifted. The two men flung themselves inside the umbrella of branches, untied the lacy bows, and drew the curtains closed The willow tree would have to stand in for their officiant, for their family, their friends, their honored guests and witnesses, for they had none. They both stood in front of the tree as the wind swayed, once from behind him, and then once from behind him, all the while their tearful eyes exchanged  silent “I dos”. The one reached inside a burrow beneath the great trunk, to retrieve their rings and crowns of flowers, while the other anxiously stood watch behind him, awaiting the thunder. Gentle hands ringed their fingers with silver bands, and crowned their heads with white and blue petals, then carefully chiseled into the bark their names and their heart with a pocket knife. The two men pressed their palms to the tree to receive their blessing, and then pressed their lips together, now salty and wet, sealing their souls with a slow passionate kiss. But instead of a burst of rice freely sprinkling the atmosphere there was a burst of shotgun pellets tearing through the whispers of love and leaves. The men sprinted to the car, dodging the fires of intimidation, and drove off with their life, leaving behind the fear and shame. They turned on the heater to try to warm up. but it was long before they were dry, the rain’s echo nearly drowning out the sounds of their shared breaths.
A little unsure about the title, but for now. . .
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Oct 15, 2014
Oct 15, 2014 at 7:14 PM UTC
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