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I went to the dentist - reluctantly, definitely - and I closed my eyes and I felt metal against my teeth as the dentist probed my mouth and then I heard his words: *"Oh what a deep cavity... Deep cavity... Deep cavity"* And I said timidly: *"Come on, doctor...you needn't repeat those words - I'm frightened enough just coming here"* "I wasn't repeating," said the dentist precise  in his words "Those were echoes you heard"
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Oct 13, 2014
Oct 13, 2014 at 4:23 PM UTC
tooth cavity
I went to the dentist - reluctantly, definitely - and I closed my eyes and I felt metal against my teeth as the dentist probed my mouth and then I heard his words: *"Oh what a deep cavity... Deep cavity... Deep cavity"* And I said timidly: *"Come on, doctor...you needn't repeat those words - I'm frightened enough just coming here"* "I wasn't repeating," said the dentist precise  in his words "Those were echoes you heard"
raj-arumugam
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Oct 13, 2014
Oct 13, 2014 at 4:23 PM UTC
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