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His fixed black eyes, turned, like a mother's to her sorrows eight metres down in a hole dug for concrete. His workmates call hoarsely from the rim but only see and hear his nothingness - “he was just here a second ago" His neck is a broken spirit, fingernails are torn away he'd flayed against the earth falling indefinitely for one and half seconds. The young concreter, carefuly finishing his glide work at the edge of the slab had stepped back to admire the reflected perfection of the sky. His mother receives the news before the slab is no longer a mirror, she pictures him falling and thinks of the last time he called, - “I only spoke to him yesterday" MChallis © 2005/2014
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Oct 10, 2014
Oct 10, 2014 at 9:44 PM UTC
Young Concretor
His fixed black eyes, turned, like a mother's to her sorrows eight metres down in a hole dug for concrete. His workmates call hoarsely from the rim but only see and hear his nothingness - “he was just here a second ago" His neck is a broken spirit, fingernails are torn away he'd flayed against the earth falling indefinitely for one and half seconds. The young concreter, carefuly finishing his glide work at the edge of the slab had stepped back to admire the reflected perfection of the sky. His mother receives the news before the slab is no longer a mirror, she pictures him falling and thinks of the last time he called, - “I only spoke to him yesterday" MChallis © 2005/2014
martin-challis
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Oct 10, 2014
Oct 10, 2014 at 9:44 PM UTC
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