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i found this little poem sitting unattended, alone, on a bench at the bus station. when i said hello... the relief and elation, on this little poem's face, made me feel protective of this, orphan creation. so i took this little poem home... no longer lost, it thrived from three lines to five and before we wished it happy cinquain it had doubled in size, again. full, rounded verse, in cursive copperplate. as it entered puberty its moods swung, between... love, anger, hate and then struggled gamely through depression angst and fear.. all jots and tittles, with future, unclear. but eventually it matured as we all do.... into a thoughtful expression of beauty and love, a strong and independant statement of grace. and then it was time, to say goodbye.... the little found poem, needed to leave and find it's place, in the wider world. needed to find and impress a girl. it said it needed, to make a splash... grab some cash... it promised not to become, just a jingle... and to write when he could.... but til then.... anon...
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Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
l.f.p.
i found this little poem sitting unattended, alone, on a bench at the bus station. when i said hello... the relief and elation, on this little poem's face, made me feel protective of this, orphan creation. so i took this little poem home... no longer lost, it thrived from three lines to five and before we wished it happy cinquain it had doubled in size, again. full, rounded verse, in cursive copperplate. as it entered puberty its moods swung, between... love, anger, hate and then struggled gamely through depression angst and fear.. all jots and tittles, with future, unclear. but eventually it matured as we all do.... into a thoughtful expression of beauty and love, a strong and independant statement of grace. and then it was time, to say goodbye.... the little found poem, needed to leave and find it's place, in the wider world. needed to find and impress a girl. it said it needed, to make a splash... grab some cash... it promised not to become, just a jingle... and to write when he could.... but til then.... anon...
i miss him, now he has gone once he was a scrappy little thing.... stuttering along now he has gone, all epic... and wears allsorts of punctuation bling!!! sometimes .... he drops me a line but all it ever says is love u mum♡♥♡ i'm doing fine!!!
betterdays
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F/Australian
Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
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