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Villanelle Please don’t stop the rain, On the floor is where I lie Ready to be hit by the pain Distorted thoughts go through my brain Asking questions, wondering why, Please don’t stop the rain. Keeps repeating, but I have to break the chain I keep falling I can’t stop but I try Please don’t stop the rain. Pressure on me, slipping closer to the insane People don’t see these tears, they don’t see me cry Please don’t stop the rain. I want to leave because I can’t take this pain Fly away. Soar. Touch the sky. Please don’t stop the rain. As I slip away there is no strain. On the floor is where I lie, I am in a euphoric peace, no more pain. Please don’t stop the rain.
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Oct 2, 2014
Oct 2, 2014 at 5:47 AM UTC
Please don't stop the rain
Villanelle Please don’t stop the rain, On the floor is where I lie Ready to be hit by the pain Distorted thoughts go through my brain Asking questions, wondering why, Please don’t stop the rain. Keeps repeating, but I have to break the chain I keep falling I can’t stop but I try Please don’t stop the rain. Pressure on me, slipping closer to the insane People don’t see these tears, they don’t see me cry Please don’t stop the rain. I want to leave because I can’t take this pain Fly away. Soar. Touch the sky. Please don’t stop the rain. As I slip away there is no strain. On the floor is where I lie, I am in a euphoric peace, no more pain. Please don’t stop the rain.
I wrote this in English at school a few years ago, and heard James Morrison on the radio earlier that morning.
poppywhittaker
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Oct 2, 2014
Oct 2, 2014 at 5:47 AM UTC
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