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An hour editing dashes to comma splices, and back leaves turn the red world sits on apostrophes’ or Atlas’ mote of Earth choosing the right word wet trousers i rake frail pages of my novel after strong wind
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Sep 30, 2014
Sep 30, 2014 at 2:31 PM UTC
Four Haiku/Senryu on Editing
An hour editing dashes to comma splices, and back leaves turn the red world sits on apostrophes’ or Atlas’ mote of Earth choosing the right word wet trousers i rake frail pages of my novel after strong wind
richard-j-heby
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Sep 30, 2014
Sep 30, 2014 at 2:31 PM UTC
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