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You and I were explorers of the first degree- I was the leader but it was never as fun without you, you know- you were essential too. We dammed streams and built castles, drew maps and hid in ferns taller than our heads. I named our places but only for you (we spoke in code; spies and pirates, explorers of the first degree). We had Greendip, The Bracken Bubble, Glory Glee with the ash tree (your branch, and my branch, and the Nasty Nipping Nettle Nasties that we drew red – danger – on the map.) We slid down hills on plastic bags and ran up them with matching hair tangling in the wind and I was the leader, but you were my crew. Your hair still matches mine and although we no longer draw maps on paper we are drawing one every day (and when I see any Nasty Nipping Nettle Nasties, I mark them in red for you, and you do the same for me). I am no longer the leader (we’re equals now, matching pioneers, and I love you).
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 6:20 PM UTC
to my little sister (Joe Cole 'Write me a poem' prompt)
You and I were explorers of the first degree- I was the leader but it was never as fun without you, you know- you were essential too. We dammed streams and built castles, drew maps and hid in ferns taller than our heads. I named our places but only for you (we spoke in code; spies and pirates, explorers of the first degree). We had Greendip, The Bracken Bubble, Glory Glee with the ash tree (your branch, and my branch, and the Nasty Nipping Nettle Nasties that we drew red – danger – on the map.) We slid down hills on plastic bags and ran up them with matching hair tangling in the wind and I was the leader, but you were my crew. Your hair still matches mine and although we no longer draw maps on paper we are drawing one every day (and when I see any Nasty Nipping Nettle Nasties, I mark them in red for you, and you do the same for me). I am no longer the leader (we’re equals now, matching pioneers, and I love you).
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 6:20 PM UTC
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