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We are young men buried in books Shoveling words every day As we are gradually shaped into tools. Ours minds drained deep in the pools Of knowledge. So they say We are young men buried in books. We find ourselves caught in hooks Of wisdom seekers shall we pray? As we are gradually shaped into tools. Exhausted, some will turn into crooks While we proudly remain grey We are young men buried in books. We bear fruit of hope from the roots Of pain so follow the rules we lay As we are gradually shaped into tools. Are we zombies in schools? In our paths we never stray. We are young men buried in books As we are gradually shaped into tools.
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 10:11 AM UTC
Diligent Minds(Villanelle)
We are young men buried in books Shoveling words every day As we are gradually shaped into tools. Ours minds drained deep in the pools Of knowledge. So they say We are young men buried in books. We find ourselves caught in hooks Of wisdom seekers shall we pray? As we are gradually shaped into tools. Exhausted, some will turn into crooks While we proudly remain grey We are young men buried in books. We bear fruit of hope from the roots Of pain so follow the rules we lay As we are gradually shaped into tools. Are we zombies in schools? In our paths we never stray. We are young men buried in books As we are gradually shaped into tools.
I've never been the one to follow structures when it comes to poetry but when I heard about the villanelle and how difficult it is to master I just got excited and inspired
jamie-king
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 10:11 AM UTC
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