Scars on snowy flesh
The serenity of pain
Melts in a moment
Alone facing the night
Thin bright blades crossing clear skin
Tribal rituals of passage
Sep 23, 2014
Sep 23, 2014 at 8:53 PM UTC
Scars on snowy flesh
The serenity of pain
Melts in a moment
Alone facing the night
Thin bright blades crossing clear skin
Tribal rituals of passage
Haikus actually don't usually have titles, as most readers here will know. I'm happy with the first. The second "needs work," as it is said.