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With what pleasure I have begun to deduce The true romance of the world! Here, in your hand, I have found solace and a world of comfort. Gone are the days of toiling in vain, Waiting for a sweet saviour to arise. Though I have come suddenly today Upon the realization that salvation Is not a flame found in others for ourselves; But an ice That freezes so succulently in your core Once you have allowed yourself to be healed By the forgiving hand of he who you love And more importantly, The hand of your own affairs. And so I give you thanks For leading me into a life of joy and bliss While subsequently rescuing me From my own worrisome and often bitter outlook. For I did not look to you to be saved, I only look to you today To alight the loving fire in me I sometimes find easy to forget.
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Sep 18, 2014
Sep 18, 2014 at 9:10 PM UTC
Love Poem #1
With what pleasure I have begun to deduce The true romance of the world! Here, in your hand, I have found solace and a world of comfort. Gone are the days of toiling in vain, Waiting for a sweet saviour to arise. Though I have come suddenly today Upon the realization that salvation Is not a flame found in others for ourselves; But an ice That freezes so succulently in your core Once you have allowed yourself to be healed By the forgiving hand of he who you love And more importantly, The hand of your own affairs. And so I give you thanks For leading me into a life of joy and bliss While subsequently rescuing me From my own worrisome and often bitter outlook. For I did not look to you to be saved, I only look to you today To alight the loving fire in me I sometimes find easy to forget.
jodie-lindamae
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28/Cisgender Female/American
Sep 18, 2014
Sep 18, 2014 at 9:10 PM UTC
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