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I move in ... " The Dark " ... Like ... Deep Sea Sharks ... Therefore ... " My Bite's " ... Worse Than ... " My Bark " ... !!! Why HATE ... because ... ? My ... skin tone's ... DARK ... ?!? Racists ... NEED ... !!! A change of heart ... !!!!! "Some Aussies" ... seem to ... ? Think they're .... SMART .... !!! .... Well ... It's ... NOT WISE ... to make me ... START ... !!!!! "Sydney" ... NEEDS ... ..... My Poetry ..... !!!!! What makes them think ... ??? it's ... " Their Country " ... !?! "Rednecks" ... NEED TO ... !!! " Leave " .... The Beach .... and check back through .... .... " Their History " .... !!!!!! I'm DARK ... like ... .... " Aborigines " .... !!! "Who" .... Just like ... ME ... will ... NEVER SEE ... !!! A time where ... we ... are ... FREE ... to live ... and ... NOT ... Witness ... HATRED .... from .... " Redneck " ... RACISTS ... Trust in this ... !!! My Darkness ... HITS ... A ... Rednecks' Lips ... with ... POTENT ... scripts that would .... " Befit " .... A day where sunlight is ... " ECLIPSED " ... !!!!! Why are ... So Many ... ? AFRAID of ... " The Dark " ... Yet seem ... Afraid ... of ... "Truth Filled" ... light ... ?!!!? " Party Times " ... are .... YES ..... .... At Night .... and ... ****** Highs ... Usually ... take flight ... Long After ... YES ... Sunlight Shines ... BRIGHT ... !!!!! Darkness ... Rules ... My ... " Inner Mind " ... and helps ... Design ... ..... " Poetic lines " ..... My use of ... rhyme ... is ... " WELL REFINED " ... to speak on ... " Darkness " ... WITHOUT ... Harshness ... !!!!!!! Reality's ... BITE ... is ... STARK and .... HEARTLESS .... !!! Racism ... I DO NOT ... " Harness " ... !!!!! But .... Darkness ... now ... is how ... things are ... !!! that may seem ... Harsh but is ....... " THE TRUTH " ..... !!! So ...... Don't you ... start ... to say ... My Mind ... is ... Primed to write ... Rhymes that send out " NEGATIVE " ... vibes ... I'm shedding ... LIGHT ... On ... " Racist Fights " ... !!!!! and ... Other Things ... Within ... My Sight ... while ... " Most " ... Ignore ... Until ... They Fall ... down to where the ... " Dark Ones " .... CALL .... " DARK " ..... Black Holes ... to ... BUY ... " Your Soul " ... Don't get ... "Caught" ... !!! you may get ... " Bought " ... and find that life ... is just ... ..... TOO SHORT ..... to ... Reject Light ... OPEN ... Your Eyes ... !!!!! and ... REALISE ... Walking ... "blind" ... Won't Help ... " Mankind " ... !!! Darkness reigns ... in skies ... these days ... !!! Especially when ... Oil Depots ... .......... BLAZE .......... !!!!!! BIG ... " Dark Clouds " ... across ... Our Towns ... !!!! Things like ... this ... are causing ... FROWNS ... !!!!! "Darkened" ... MOODS ... as fuel .... " POLLUTES " .... !!! Our ... Atmosphere ... and Peoples' ... food ... !!!!! ... Oil is ... CRUDE ... and in ... " The News " ... I'm Saying .... Can't ... " These Fools " ... ... " COMPUTE " ... ?!?!? or ... " Manage " ... things that need ... TIGHT SCREWS ... !!!!! Clearly ... NOT ... !!!!! They're ... Needing Clues ... on how this ... Started ... in the ... " DARK " ... ?!!!? ... Things are now ... Falling .... apart .... !!! Like i've ... said ... Reality's ... STARK ... " REALITY " .... Sheds Light ... for me ... on things ... " Most Folks " ... DON'T WANT ... "to see" ... ..... " Poverty " ..... Breeding ... More Thieves ... !!! .... " Violence on " Our ... Darkened Streets ... !!!!!!!! Cash Scandals ... from ... Companies ... who have ... "Close Links" ... with our ... " MP's " ... Armies ... who ... now ... DESTROY ... Peace ... !!! and leave more ... " Broken Families " ... !!!!! These are ... " DARK TIMES " ... !!! I think you'll find ... ? Unless you ... " Choose " ... to be .... inclined .... to ..... look away ...... and turn ... " blind eyes " ... You may find ... that ... You'll be ... surprised ... !!! because ... " Such Actions " ... are ...... " UNWISE " ...... !!!!! Walk in ... " The Light " ... NOT in ... " The Dark " ... before ... Your Life ... Gets Ripped ... APART ... !!!!! Don't play ... " Smart " ... cos' ... Nature Now ... is ... Hitting ... HARD ... !!!!! and .... NOBODY .... Can Pull ... " It's Card " ... !!!!!! " Big City " ... Lights ... are ... NOT SO ... bright ... Just like ... " Class " Life's Now ... A Farce ... !?! Do what's ... NEEDED ... !!! Show Some ... HEART ... !!! It's NOT ... That Hard ... !!! Before our hopes and dreams ... and world become a place ... That's COLD ... ........ and ....... ..... " Dark " .....
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Sep 17, 2014
Sep 17, 2014 at 4:20 PM UTC
"Dark" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 12/12/2005
I move in ... " The Dark " ... Like ... Deep Sea Sharks ... Therefore ... " My Bite's " ... Worse Than ... " My Bark " ... !!! Why HATE ... because ... ? My ... skin tone's ... DARK ... ?!? Racists ... NEED ... !!! A change of heart ... !!!!! "Some Aussies" ... seem to ... ? Think they're .... SMART .... !!! .... Well ... It's ... NOT WISE ... to make me ... START ... !!!!! "Sydney" ... NEEDS ... ..... My Poetry ..... !!!!! What makes them think ... ??? it's ... " Their Country " ... !?! "Rednecks" ... NEED TO ... !!! " Leave " .... The Beach .... and check back through .... .... " Their History " .... !!!!!! I'm DARK ... like ... .... " Aborigines " .... !!! "Who" .... Just like ... ME ... will ... NEVER SEE ... !!! A time where ... we ... are ... FREE ... to live ... and ... NOT ... Witness ... HATRED .... from .... " Redneck " ... RACISTS ... Trust in this ... !!! My Darkness ... HITS ... A ... Rednecks' Lips ... with ... POTENT ... scripts that would .... " Befit " .... A day where sunlight is ... " ECLIPSED " ... !!!!! Why are ... So Many ... ? AFRAID of ... " The Dark " ... Yet seem ... Afraid ... of ... "Truth Filled" ... light ... ?!!!? " Party Times " ... are .... YES ..... .... At Night .... and ... ****** Highs ... Usually ... take flight ... Long After ... YES ... Sunlight Shines ... BRIGHT ... !!!!! Darkness ... Rules ... My ... " Inner Mind " ... and helps ... Design ... ..... " Poetic lines " ..... My use of ... rhyme ... is ... " WELL REFINED " ... to speak on ... " Darkness " ... WITHOUT ... Harshness ... !!!!!!! Reality's ... BITE ... is ... STARK and .... HEARTLESS .... !!! Racism ... I DO NOT ... " Harness " ... !!!!! But .... Darkness ... now ... is how ... things are ... !!! that may seem ... Harsh but is ....... " THE TRUTH " ..... !!! So ...... Don't you ... start ... to say ... My Mind ... is ... Primed to write ... Rhymes that send out " NEGATIVE " ... vibes ... I'm shedding ... LIGHT ... On ... " Racist Fights " ... !!!!! and ... Other Things ... Within ... My Sight ... while ... " Most " ... Ignore ... Until ... They Fall ... down to where the ... " Dark Ones " .... CALL .... " DARK " ..... Black Holes ... to ... BUY ... " Your Soul " ... Don't get ... "Caught" ... !!! you may get ... " Bought " ... and find that life ... is just ... ..... TOO SHORT ..... to ... Reject Light ... OPEN ... Your Eyes ... !!!!! and ... REALISE ... Walking ... "blind" ... Won't Help ... " Mankind " ... !!! Darkness reigns ... in skies ... these days ... !!! Especially when ... Oil Depots ... .......... BLAZE .......... !!!!!! BIG ... " Dark Clouds " ... across ... Our Towns ... !!!! Things like ... this ... are causing ... FROWNS ... !!!!! "Darkened" ... MOODS ... as fuel .... " POLLUTES " .... !!! Our ... Atmosphere ... and Peoples' ... food ... !!!!! ... Oil is ... CRUDE ... and in ... " The News " ... I'm Saying .... Can't ... " These Fools " ... ... " COMPUTE " ... ?!?!? or ... " Manage " ... things that need ... TIGHT SCREWS ... !!!!! Clearly ... NOT ... !!!!! They're ... Needing Clues ... on how this ... Started ... in the ... " DARK " ... ?!!!? ... Things are now ... Falling .... apart .... !!! Like i've ... said ... Reality's ... STARK ... " REALITY " .... Sheds Light ... for me ... on things ... " Most Folks " ... DON'T WANT ... "to see" ... ..... " Poverty " ..... Breeding ... More Thieves ... !!! .... " Violence on " Our ... Darkened Streets ... !!!!!!!! Cash Scandals ... from ... Companies ... who have ... "Close Links" ... with our ... " MP's " ... Armies ... who ... now ... DESTROY ... Peace ... !!! and leave more ... " Broken Families " ... !!!!! These are ... " DARK TIMES " ... !!! I think you'll find ... ? Unless you ... " Choose " ... to be .... inclined .... to ..... look away ...... and turn ... " blind eyes " ... You may find ... that ... You'll be ... surprised ... !!! because ... " Such Actions " ... are ...... " UNWISE " ...... !!!!! Walk in ... " The Light " ... NOT in ... " The Dark " ... before ... Your Life ... Gets Ripped ... APART ... !!!!! Don't play ... " Smart " ... cos' ... Nature Now ... is ... Hitting ... HARD ... !!!!! and .... NOBODY .... Can Pull ... " It's Card " ... !!!!!! " Big City " ... Lights ... are ... NOT SO ... bright ... Just like ... " Class " Life's Now ... A Farce ... !?! Do what's ... NEEDED ... !!! Show Some ... HEART ... !!! It's NOT ... That Hard ... !!! Before our hopes and dreams ... and world become a place ... That's COLD ... ........ and ....... ..... " Dark " .....
Inspired, in part, by the, Cronulla Beach Violence, in Australia, and the, Buncefield Fire in England ......
#poverty#violence#crime#oil#racism#australia#sydney#mps#buncefield#aborigines
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