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I have to fit Eddie into sixteen pages twelve point font, double spaced enough room for critiques and mistakes How do I pack his spirit inside black inked words, inch and half borders? How can I convey his essence and what his departure from earth left behind? I'd have a better chance of describing the ocean to the blind or the sound of bird's song to the deaf No words said could give him justice and bring him back take his lifeless ash resurrect him but I have to I must spill him out from this pen make him whole dismiss the cold of death so I can tell the world "Even when their gone you can still feel them in your...your... breath..."
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 4:38 AM UTC
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I have to fit Eddie into sixteen pages twelve point font, double spaced enough room for critiques and mistakes How do I pack his spirit inside black inked words, inch and half borders? How can I convey his essence and what his departure from earth left behind? I'd have a better chance of describing the ocean to the blind or the sound of bird's song to the deaf No words said could give him justice and bring him back take his lifeless ash resurrect him but I have to I must spill him out from this pen make him whole dismiss the cold of death so I can tell the world "Even when their gone you can still feel them in your...your... breath..."
Daniel Magner 2014 When I read this aloud I take a deep breath and let it out as I say the last word
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 4:38 AM UTC
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