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stars twinkled around me until i had to notice them until i had to open my eyes they breathed across my skin and planted themselves deep inside my aching chest i was filled with their light; i took the leap upwards- a journey in the celestial sea i lost myself in the eyes of jupiter, venus, and mars freckling my skin like dice the constellations drove in donuts, around the sea pouring themselves out space was everything space was always there in waves of varying gravity i rode asteroids into six different shooting stars until i held the world the cosmic microwave filled me to the brim with it's premordial sound
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 8:55 PM UTC
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stars twinkled around me until i had to notice them until i had to open my eyes they breathed across my skin and planted themselves deep inside my aching chest i was filled with their light; i took the leap upwards- a journey in the celestial sea i lost myself in the eyes of jupiter, venus, and mars freckling my skin like dice the constellations drove in donuts, around the sea pouring themselves out space was everything space was always there in waves of varying gravity i rode asteroids into six different shooting stars until i held the world the cosmic microwave filled me to the brim with it's premordial sound
typhany
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 8:55 PM UTC
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