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I'd like to begin by pointing out the color of the walls; the pink under the plaster, and the tubes, red and blue, that keep my shower water warm. This is my home, that some call a temple, with two brightly lit halves of an attic, and no trouble keeping them full. Its windows are always open, except when the lights go out and the shutters are pulled closed and all that's left breathing is the fireplace and the attic. the fire place is a grand face of grout and proud brick cradling the humblest coals under his black, stuffy nose clogged with no longer solid logs. His breath keeps the attic warm, with the help of the coals, who ask for no thanks. I'd invite you in if it wasn't for the moss on the threshhold. That emerald green. Those gems that seem, with dew, to gleem   a blue and gold sheen of umpteen citrines. The sun's careen is seen by these green finger leaves. When I turn out the lights and retreat to the attic, I hear the moss sigh like some sort of static. Her breath reaches the crest of my gentle home's breast. The ceiling beam shudder with a reeling like no other; A sound that makes me cry, while my cluttered attic comforts me, and I speak no word but why. The moss, she makes me cry. I'd like to end by pointing out the color of the windowpanes, and the gray of the drywall. The tubes, red and blue, still keep my shower water warm. This is my home, that some call a temple, with two brightly lit halves of an attic, and no trouble keeping them full. Its windows are rarely open, except when the lights go out and the shutters flutter open and all that's left breathing is the fireplace and the attic, and the colors.
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Jan 4, 2011
Jan 4, 2011 at 1:29 PM UTC
A Brief Tour
I'd like to begin by pointing out the color of the walls; the pink under the plaster, and the tubes, red and blue, that keep my shower water warm. This is my home, that some call a temple, with two brightly lit halves of an attic, and no trouble keeping them full. Its windows are always open, except when the lights go out and the shutters are pulled closed and all that's left breathing is the fireplace and the attic. the fire place is a grand face of grout and proud brick cradling the humblest coals under his black, stuffy nose clogged with no longer solid logs. His breath keeps the attic warm, with the help of the coals, who ask for no thanks. I'd invite you in if it wasn't for the moss on the threshhold. That emerald green. Those gems that seem, with dew, to gleem   a blue and gold sheen of umpteen citrines. The sun's careen is seen by these green finger leaves. When I turn out the lights and retreat to the attic, I hear the moss sigh like some sort of static. Her breath reaches the crest of my gentle home's breast. The ceiling beam shudder with a reeling like no other; A sound that makes me cry, while my cluttered attic comforts me, and I speak no word but why. The moss, she makes me cry. I'd like to end by pointing out the color of the windowpanes, and the gray of the drywall. The tubes, red and blue, still keep my shower water warm. This is my home, that some call a temple, with two brightly lit halves of an attic, and no trouble keeping them full. Its windows are rarely open, except when the lights go out and the shutters flutter open and all that's left breathing is the fireplace and the attic, and the colors.
Copyright: Bennett Tyler
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Jan 4, 2011
Jan 4, 2011 at 1:29 PM UTC
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