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(For Sia Jane) once he wrote: "Writing is more important than any of the individual senses that feed this (writing) addiction. Without sound, sight, touch, smell and taste, I can (still) live quite well." and she loved this, for well she lived this ideation so textual emendation for this girl, one of god's human poems irony kick in the head, truth driven home by body of late, crossed and staked, weeks pass, I cannot taste or smell, eyesight distorted by streaming eyes, no matter, sight, sees only a decrepit man lousy repeating repetitiously older spasms of writing, all this time he is one who touches nothing lest he infect the world, with something other than joy... all thanks to some insidious bacterial invaders and one or two Lifetime Movie Channel dramas playing out in full color in his own sad reality so let me amend my prior write, for this time, I make no overly boastful claims, for I could pen nary a verse all these hours, that was deserved of your affection... write I could with any one of the five, if four were repleted, deleted, none elited, but one is this man's de minimus need at least one to function, to master the bronco impulse to create... don't matter which one, which orifice writes the code, all sensory inputs end up residing in your heart and soul but gotta have at least one in order to express my love for love... and if I can't do that, then experience shows, no way can the being supersede its thrumming, hum drumming, existence, motoring along highways circularized of watching old tv shows if I lose my hands I will write with elbows, nose or toes... my tongue cut, my mind will love more, its recollection of your taste, delicious twice over blinded and bereft, my mind's eye will do double shifts, get paid overtime, for reliving connecting your birthmarks my jesting muted, my seers closed, my nostrils sealed, even terminated, dare you think, that I cannot hear or smell my thoughts, of the pleasure of a world in which loves existence demands we heal the sick at heart, so we can extend love to ourselves and others beyond the mere limitations of our corporeal senses.... one, but one, all I need, any one,  in order to sense who I am, to love, and be loved, therefore, to write
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Sep 7, 2014
Sep 7, 2014 at 2:12 PM UTC
A New Poem: A Sense of Who You Are
(For Sia Jane) once he wrote: "Writing is more important than any of the individual senses that feed this (writing) addiction. Without sound, sight, touch, smell and taste, I can (still) live quite well." and she loved this, for well she lived this ideation so textual emendation for this girl, one of god's human poems irony kick in the head, truth driven home by body of late, crossed and staked, weeks pass, I cannot taste or smell, eyesight distorted by streaming eyes, no matter, sight, sees only a decrepit man lousy repeating repetitiously older spasms of writing, all this time he is one who touches nothing lest he infect the world, with something other than joy... all thanks to some insidious bacterial invaders and one or two Lifetime Movie Channel dramas playing out in full color in his own sad reality so let me amend my prior write, for this time, I make no overly boastful claims, for I could pen nary a verse all these hours, that was deserved of your affection... write I could with any one of the five, if four were repleted, deleted, none elited, but one is this man's de minimus need at least one to function, to master the bronco impulse to create... don't matter which one, which orifice writes the code, all sensory inputs end up residing in your heart and soul but gotta have at least one in order to express my love for love... and if I can't do that, then experience shows, no way can the being supersede its thrumming, hum drumming, existence, motoring along highways circularized of watching old tv shows if I lose my hands I will write with elbows, nose or toes... my tongue cut, my mind will love more, its recollection of your taste, delicious twice over blinded and bereft, my mind's eye will do double shifts, get paid overtime, for reliving connecting your birthmarks my jesting muted, my seers closed, my nostrils sealed, even terminated, dare you think, that I cannot hear or smell my thoughts, of the pleasure of a world in which loves existence demands we heal the sick at heart, so we can extend love to ourselves and others beyond the mere limitations of our corporeal senses.... one, but one, all I need, any one,  in order to sense who I am, to love, and be loved, therefore, to write
Sept. 7, 2014 but what if forced to choose one sense above all? Once he wrote: what then, weary reader, is the supposed Laureate's approved analytical tool? Taste Each letter, a morsel in your mouth, Each phrase, a fork full of pleasure, Each stanza, a full fledged member in a tasting menu, Perfect only in conjunction with the preceding flavor, and the one that follows,  and the one that follows. Taste each poem upon thy tongue and then pass it on, you know how.... Each word, whether chewed thoroughly, or lightly placed upon a bud for flavor, needs the careful consideration of your mouth. Feel the light pressure of the tongues tip upon the roof of your mouth and the exalted exhalations of air rushing past thy cheeks as you messenger breath from your chest to be shared with the world, over the poem's interpreter, your tasting lips. As I lay each word down, a brick by brick edifice construct of mine own design, I am sated, fulfilled only, when with I see your lips move as you savor my words, my taste you share, and we are closer for it. Deaf, dumb and blind, all such travails can be conquered, assailed, but when I cannot, no longer anymore taste my poems upon thy lips, then I breathe no more.
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Sep 7, 2014
Sep 7, 2014 at 2:12 PM UTC
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