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her light is dim, her words are slow, she ambles now. no more for her, the rat race. no more, the daily grind. her food is mush, she sits alseep, for hours, in the warm sunshine. no more hustle, nor any hint of bustle. she is stooped and has made an art, of the acts of decline. no more, taking orders, she, bides her own time. she knows, her coil is ending and that, the gentle night beckons. but still she whines. until shooshed and comforted and put up, into bed. this old dog, Bess has lived, long past her prime. it is just a sense of well- placed loyalty, that keeps her mind fixed on staying, here with John... way past her alloted time.
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Sep 4, 2014
Sep 4, 2014 at 10:14 AM UTC
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her light is dim, her words are slow, she ambles now. no more for her, the rat race. no more, the daily grind. her food is mush, she sits alseep, for hours, in the warm sunshine. no more hustle, nor any hint of bustle. she is stooped and has made an art, of the acts of decline. no more, taking orders, she, bides her own time. she knows, her coil is ending and that, the gentle night beckons. but still she whines. until shooshed and comforted and put up, into bed. this old dog, Bess has lived, long past her prime. it is just a sense of well- placed loyalty, that keeps her mind fixed on staying, here with John... way past her alloted time.
written for john..aged 72 and his companion bess aged 98(in dog years) and the love that keeps them shufflin thru...
betterdays
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F/Australian
Sep 4, 2014
Sep 4, 2014 at 10:14 AM UTC
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