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Let's escape urban scorching days; hot cement, sirens, and flashings from red to blue then blue again Let's excape where a cool, cushioned green hill in quiet and stillness awaits across a narrow steel blue-green bridge A bridge crossing,weeded, rusty, broken railroad tracks that beckons the call to the other side, from warlike city summer shouts and cries Let's flee abandoned pill-box look-alikes these homeless homes Let's flee boundaries of barbed fences and stone, these monuments of a choking society Just the same paradise one block away denied by our madness vacantly awaits, like a non-seduced wooded hill what impotent partners we are And almost never remembered, those whispering leafy archways, where those bending canopy branches spread to protect from the sun the absent human head A head filled with rememberances yet forgotten childhood days of tranquil green, the smell of grass, And birds that sing and fly Forgotten way-up-puffs of white against blue, a musical buzzing bumblebe And a little dancing ladybug on a mushroom table top Forgotten parachute seeds, that fly and a branch upon the ground, your swatting stick, your staff, your royal rod All forgotten KINGS and QUEENS we are in paradise just one block away...
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Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 4:48 AM UTC
Fairmount park's Forgotten Paradise(a revision)
Let's escape urban scorching days; hot cement, sirens, and flashings from red to blue then blue again Let's excape where a cool, cushioned green hill in quiet and stillness awaits across a narrow steel blue-green bridge A bridge crossing,weeded, rusty, broken railroad tracks that beckons the call to the other side, from warlike city summer shouts and cries Let's flee abandoned pill-box look-alikes these homeless homes Let's flee boundaries of barbed fences and stone, these monuments of a choking society Just the same paradise one block away denied by our madness vacantly awaits, like a non-seduced wooded hill what impotent partners we are And almost never remembered, those whispering leafy archways, where those bending canopy branches spread to protect from the sun the absent human head A head filled with rememberances yet forgotten childhood days of tranquil green, the smell of grass, And birds that sing and fly Forgotten way-up-puffs of white against blue, a musical buzzing bumblebe And a little dancing ladybug on a mushroom table top Forgotten parachute seeds, that fly and a branch upon the ground, your swatting stick, your staff, your royal rod All forgotten KINGS and QUEENS we are in paradise just one block away...
This is in Philly around Fairmount park. The area is around 27 th and Pennsylvania Avenue where homes are blocks away and also a literal stone throw away. To get to the park you have to cross a blue-green bridge. ( Brewery town area)
rw-dennen
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Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 4:48 AM UTC
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