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she looks at me as if to say, you were simply, an honest mistake, made with good intention, and nice at the time, but long since forgotten, a futile woodwind, in an orchestral life, struggling to make an impact, on hyperbolic composition... tell me, truthfully, you don’t remember its pitch, the call of its notes, rang true, it seemed, for you to imply, it was not even heard, makes a mockery of the efforts made, honestly, just once, say its crescendoes did not bellow, with the strength of a timpani, the sweetness of flutes, the heart of a sax, say that the notes that you sang at the time, were a lie, simply, an honest mistake, and i'll leave this composition, promising though it seemed, broken and incomplete, just as you’d like.
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Dec 29, 2010
Dec 29, 2010 at 9:45 PM UTC
just like music
she looks at me as if to say, you were simply, an honest mistake, made with good intention, and nice at the time, but long since forgotten, a futile woodwind, in an orchestral life, struggling to make an impact, on hyperbolic composition... tell me, truthfully, you don’t remember its pitch, the call of its notes, rang true, it seemed, for you to imply, it was not even heard, makes a mockery of the efforts made, honestly, just once, say its crescendoes did not bellow, with the strength of a timpani, the sweetness of flutes, the heart of a sax, say that the notes that you sang at the time, were a lie, simply, an honest mistake, and i'll leave this composition, promising though it seemed, broken and incomplete, just as you’d like.
Copyright SMK, 2007.
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Dec 29, 2010
Dec 29, 2010 at 9:45 PM UTC
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