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Sunlight, dawning beyond the platform, Pink and gold harmonies, I look down, At the train tracks, Gravel, lost between the rails, Humble wooden planks, Aging silently, I wonder if I could walk on them, With the dancing autumn leaves, Couldn't I just jump, I could lay down on them, No goodbyes, no second thoughts, And take one last breathe... I take a step to the edge, The ground shudders, As if in disagreement Train racing round the bend, My one hope, My small window of opportunity, Gone, As I leave this town behind, On my train
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Dec 28, 2010
Dec 28, 2010 at 3:46 PM UTC
Train Tracks
Sunlight, dawning beyond the platform, Pink and gold harmonies, I look down, At the train tracks, Gravel, lost between the rails, Humble wooden planks, Aging silently, I wonder if I could walk on them, With the dancing autumn leaves, Couldn't I just jump, I could lay down on them, No goodbyes, no second thoughts, And take one last breathe... I take a step to the edge, The ground shudders, As if in disagreement Train racing round the bend, My one hope, My small window of opportunity, Gone, As I leave this town behind, On my train
©Nicola-Isobel H.     29.12.2010 Suggestions for a more appropriate ending would be much appreciated!
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Dec 28, 2010
Dec 28, 2010 at 3:46 PM UTC
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