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We were laying over a wooden bed floating idly above a black abyss, sitting below nature's night chandelier whispering among ourselves, listening not only to how each other's lives had been, but also to the evening clamor of strangers and the hearty cheers of wine glasses and serenades. As most things, I only noticed After the effect: A string of stardust, shooting across our atmosphere, leaving streaks of champagne light then disappearing into the next world. Tradition struck me, and with all my soul I desperately wished For something better. Asked, and I had received.
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Aug 30, 2014
Aug 30, 2014 at 2:35 PM UTC
Cosmos
We were laying over a wooden bed floating idly above a black abyss, sitting below nature's night chandelier whispering among ourselves, listening not only to how each other's lives had been, but also to the evening clamor of strangers and the hearty cheers of wine glasses and serenades. As most things, I only noticed After the effect: A string of stardust, shooting across our atmosphere, leaving streaks of champagne light then disappearing into the next world. Tradition struck me, and with all my soul I desperately wished For something better. Asked, and I had received.
i saw a shooting star in florida.
alexis-kees
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Aug 30, 2014
Aug 30, 2014 at 2:35 PM UTC
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