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Breathing's barely bareable, I'm losing this thing called control, It's like a car-crash, Like a whorl-wind, Like the stabbing of a knife, Through the black bruise, On your broken heart, That tears at your insides, Flashback back to better times, When I don't dream, And you don't cry, Pull me back to stable days, And nights of certainty, Fall out of time and make us right, Pull the trigger and say good-bye, Take me back: I miss you
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Dec 27, 2010
Dec 27, 2010 at 6:38 PM UTC
A Feeling For The Lonesome
Breathing's barely bareable, I'm losing this thing called control, It's like a car-crash, Like a whorl-wind, Like the stabbing of a knife, Through the black bruise, On your broken heart, That tears at your insides, Flashback back to better times, When I don't dream, And you don't cry, Pull me back to stable days, And nights of certainty, Fall out of time and make us right, Pull the trigger and say good-bye, Take me back: I miss you
©Nicola-Isobel H. 28.12.2010
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28/F/Australian
Dec 27, 2010
Dec 27, 2010 at 6:38 PM UTC
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