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I feel crushed, Under the weight of your dissapproving eye And your sincere care. You remind me of the path I chose, And I chose poorly. You dispute who I am, And make me want to retract my sin. You remind me of the flaws I hold, These flaws crippling. You stay strong, tolerant, But I know it hurts you. I wish my free-will cast upon the earth, For the dissappointment and hurt you feel When you behold my being. We are not gods, despite your perfection, But I pray to you for forgiveness. And I yearn for you to pray for me To be stronger. One word from your mouth , Stops me in my tracks. My momentum for vice gone. I cannot betray you, I will not blaspheme against that care filled face, I shall be better In your name.
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Dec 27, 2010
Dec 27, 2010 at 5:11 PM UTC
The Look
I feel crushed, Under the weight of your dissapproving eye And your sincere care. You remind me of the path I chose, And I chose poorly. You dispute who I am, And make me want to retract my sin. You remind me of the flaws I hold, These flaws crippling. You stay strong, tolerant, But I know it hurts you. I wish my free-will cast upon the earth, For the dissappointment and hurt you feel When you behold my being. We are not gods, despite your perfection, But I pray to you for forgiveness. And I yearn for you to pray for me To be stronger. One word from your mouth , Stops me in my tracks. My momentum for vice gone. I cannot betray you, I will not blaspheme against that care filled face, I shall be better In your name.
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Dec 27, 2010
Dec 27, 2010 at 5:11 PM UTC
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