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It was after some stupid fight that I was walking along, the sun warm on my face, and I stumbled upon a note. I paused and looked, just in case the one who dropped it was still in sight, but no one was around. Curious beyond reason, I stared; frozen by an inner debate. Caution urged me to leave it there but caution was never my strongest trait, so I picked up this note I had found. I looked it over, it being completely plain and I wondered if I should open it. Perhaps it contained something better left unseen; a deep, dark, forgotten secret Or something worse, sick and obscene. Perhaps something evil or utterly profane. But there was a chance it was something sweet; a note of passion and honesty. A beautiful expression of love unending, a note of caring, belonging, and need. A lover’s carefully worded longing meant to meld two souls into one complete. Or it could be a note of sorrow; a soul isolated in feelings of solitude crying out in desperate need. A final word to the world before from themselves they allow to bleed their every promise of tomorrow. By then the temptation was much too great. I wanted to know the truth of this note. I had to see what was inside- treasure map, words of anger or of promise, whether truth, lies, of those living or those who have died, this note was mine now, my secret link to fate. Slowly I opened it, hardly breathing at all. There lay the words I’d been dying to see, each printed with neat deliberation. Milk, eggs, bread, celery… Disappointed, I let the note fall.
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Aug 29, 2014
Aug 29, 2014 at 12:01 PM UTC
Expectations
It was after some stupid fight that I was walking along, the sun warm on my face, and I stumbled upon a note. I paused and looked, just in case the one who dropped it was still in sight, but no one was around. Curious beyond reason, I stared; frozen by an inner debate. Caution urged me to leave it there but caution was never my strongest trait, so I picked up this note I had found. I looked it over, it being completely plain and I wondered if I should open it. Perhaps it contained something better left unseen; a deep, dark, forgotten secret Or something worse, sick and obscene. Perhaps something evil or utterly profane. But there was a chance it was something sweet; a note of passion and honesty. A beautiful expression of love unending, a note of caring, belonging, and need. A lover’s carefully worded longing meant to meld two souls into one complete. Or it could be a note of sorrow; a soul isolated in feelings of solitude crying out in desperate need. A final word to the world before from themselves they allow to bleed their every promise of tomorrow. By then the temptation was much too great. I wanted to know the truth of this note. I had to see what was inside- treasure map, words of anger or of promise, whether truth, lies, of those living or those who have died, this note was mine now, my secret link to fate. Slowly I opened it, hardly breathing at all. There lay the words I’d been dying to see, each printed with neat deliberation. Milk, eggs, bread, celery… Disappointed, I let the note fall.
jessica-crandall
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Aug 29, 2014
Aug 29, 2014 at 12:01 PM UTC
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