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If you praise me too much I will suspect you If you criticize me constructively I will respect you I am no longer a child To be pleased and appeased My vanity and ego Have almost been released A criticizing friend is better Than a flattering foe A friend criticizes you in your presence And praises in your absence A foe pleases you to fool you And make you forget your own view s/he will mock you at your back you will be deceived by his/her knack I prefer the piercing arrows To softening flower bouquets The arrows may make wounds in my body They will never touch my soul by anybody Flattery is the fools’ food It doesn’t do me any good I am ready to enter the dangerous wood I have an abundant faith in my LORD
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Dec 25, 2010
Dec 25, 2010 at 4:45 AM UTC
I AM NO LONGER A CHILD
If you praise me too much I will suspect you If you criticize me constructively I will respect you I am no longer a child To be pleased and appeased My vanity and ego Have almost been released A criticizing friend is better Than a flattering foe A friend criticizes you in your presence And praises in your absence A foe pleases you to fool you And make you forget your own view s/he will mock you at your back you will be deceived by his/her knack I prefer the piercing arrows To softening flower bouquets The arrows may make wounds in my body They will never touch my soul by anybody Flattery is the fools’ food It doesn’t do me any good I am ready to enter the dangerous wood I have an abundant faith in my LORD
jvl-narasimha-rao
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Dec 25, 2010
Dec 25, 2010 at 4:45 AM UTC
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