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Eighteen years. Eighteen long years I've lived on this planet, Slaving away as another conformist to most rules (But only so I could survive And get an education, despite the breakdowns As my mind couldn't handle the pressure Of today's expectations). At times I thought I wouldn't make it; My lows were... pretty low; They sometimes cancelled out the highs completely, Or at least made them seem not so high. But somehow, I made it, Along with all the other eighteen-year-olds. And so I say, congratulations. We made it. We may be beaten, bruised, and battered, Broken, cracked, and frayed, But we're here. Brace yourselves. We're in for a whole new set of challenges.
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 12:45 AM UTC
Eighteen
Eighteen years. Eighteen long years I've lived on this planet, Slaving away as another conformist to most rules (But only so I could survive And get an education, despite the breakdowns As my mind couldn't handle the pressure Of today's expectations). At times I thought I wouldn't make it; My lows were... pretty low; They sometimes cancelled out the highs completely, Or at least made them seem not so high. But somehow, I made it, Along with all the other eighteen-year-olds. And so I say, congratulations. We made it. We may be beaten, bruised, and battered, Broken, cracked, and frayed, But we're here. Brace yourselves. We're in for a whole new set of challenges.
kate-e-deter
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 12:45 AM UTC
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