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We came from dreams Arrived in our beds Having just been separated, we formulated plots that would return us to each other. A switch from the subconscious sparked miles between us. We talked through wires until it was no longer tolerable. I went to find you, and found myself with you, the journey blurred. There were others. They were all beautiful. But then darkness took our sight. And everything was quiet. I had never known beauty unseen, unheard. but...you touched me You felt me, like a cloud feels a mountain peak before taking the highest point away from the rest of the world's...sight. Like a confused thing on a strange planet...but not frightened. You touched me with want. And I wanted you. To know all of me. Including the bad parts. And I wanted you to add to me, things I didn't even know yet... The sad parts. And a moment was a year to me. And I was wise for a second. We left. your room. out into the night. the others around us, expressing such joyous jubilation. And still I couldn't derive joy from their moods. My capacity for happiness was overfull. All you. Bring back the sight. Bring back our voices. Remember the touch. Undying. Our souls touched. The whole night long. Until we had to leave. Because we were afraid of a supernova. so we hurried back to our respective beds and that was the fastest I ever fell asleep and I know you did too. because I saw you there In that room. In my room, in my head, in your bed, full of dreams. Dos mil y seis. Yo fue yo...fue yo y tu. Me odio.
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Dec 19, 2010
Dec 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM UTC
A summary of events-
We came from dreams Arrived in our beds Having just been separated, we formulated plots that would return us to each other. A switch from the subconscious sparked miles between us. We talked through wires until it was no longer tolerable. I went to find you, and found myself with you, the journey blurred. There were others. They were all beautiful. But then darkness took our sight. And everything was quiet. I had never known beauty unseen, unheard. but...you touched me You felt me, like a cloud feels a mountain peak before taking the highest point away from the rest of the world's...sight. Like a confused thing on a strange planet...but not frightened. You touched me with want. And I wanted you. To know all of me. Including the bad parts. And I wanted you to add to me, things I didn't even know yet... The sad parts. And a moment was a year to me. And I was wise for a second. We left. your room. out into the night. the others around us, expressing such joyous jubilation. And still I couldn't derive joy from their moods. My capacity for happiness was overfull. All you. Bring back the sight. Bring back our voices. Remember the touch. Undying. Our souls touched. The whole night long. Until we had to leave. Because we were afraid of a supernova. so we hurried back to our respective beds and that was the fastest I ever fell asleep and I know you did too. because I saw you there In that room. In my room, in my head, in your bed, full of dreams. Dos mil y seis. Yo fue yo...fue yo y tu. Me odio.
orion-schwalm
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Dec 19, 2010
Dec 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM UTC
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