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I met Netanya at the rail station it was January and cold and she was dressed up in the blue overcoat and headscarf and I was in my combat style overcoat and hat you made it ok? I said yes he asked where I was going and I said for a walk to get him out of my head she said we got tickets and boarded a train and off we went to Brighton the carriage was crowded but we seemed alone or so it felt to me will he imagine you going to Brighton? no he won't think anything too busy watching TV and drinking his beer she said she held my hand and talked of her kids and her father who wasn't well and looking forward to meeting you she added I looked at her as she spoke her hair dark and curled her eyes bright as stars we made it to Brighton and got off the train and walked down to the seafront hand in hand the sky dark stars moon and lights from shops and pier and somewhere out there I thought another life another world buzzes on while here we walked on along the seafront taking in the scene the smell of salt and sound of sea crashing on the shore and her hand small warm in mine and the sense of life going on around and I feeling (oh)so fine.
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Aug 16, 2014
Aug 16, 2014 at 4:47 AM UTC
BRIGHTON 1975.
I met Netanya at the rail station it was January and cold and she was dressed up in the blue overcoat and headscarf and I was in my combat style overcoat and hat you made it ok? I said yes he asked where I was going and I said for a walk to get him out of my head she said we got tickets and boarded a train and off we went to Brighton the carriage was crowded but we seemed alone or so it felt to me will he imagine you going to Brighton? no he won't think anything too busy watching TV and drinking his beer she said she held my hand and talked of her kids and her father who wasn't well and looking forward to meeting you she added I looked at her as she spoke her hair dark and curled her eyes bright as stars we made it to Brighton and got off the train and walked down to the seafront hand in hand the sky dark stars moon and lights from shops and pier and somewhere out there I thought another life another world buzzes on while here we walked on along the seafront taking in the scene the smell of salt and sound of sea crashing on the shore and her hand small warm in mine and the sense of life going on around and I feeling (oh)so fine.
A MAN AND WOMAN ONE EVENING IN BRIGHTON IN 1975.
terry-collett
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Aug 16, 2014
Aug 16, 2014 at 4:47 AM UTC
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