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Wasting time shortens life. Spending time studying other people. ...One's you don't care about. Wondering 'could you be like them.' Succumbing yourself to doubt. ...doing things, you never wanted to. Telling yourself, what you cannot do. ...Telling lies to yourself, then saying, that you never knew. ...Qestioning Life, ....rather than: ...trying, ..to find out , ...the asnwer, on your own. Scolding at yourself, ...with a constant pity tone. If it didn't make you happy, then it wasn't worth your time. life won't have you, doing over, ..mountians you've past   climbed. © J-d S. J
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Aug 13, 2014
Aug 13, 2014 at 12:00 PM UTC
**Life *ISN'T* Too Short**
Wasting time shortens life. Spending time studying other people. ...One's you don't care about. Wondering 'could you be like them.' Succumbing yourself to doubt. ...doing things, you never wanted to. Telling yourself, what you cannot do. ...Telling lies to yourself, then saying, that you never knew. ...Qestioning Life, ....rather than: ...trying, ..to find out , ...the asnwer, on your own. Scolding at yourself, ...with a constant pity tone. If it didn't make you happy, then it wasn't worth your time. life won't have you, doing over, ..mountians you've past   climbed. © J-d S. J
The last lines had me in a dilemma.
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Aug 13, 2014
Aug 13, 2014 at 12:00 PM UTC
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