The way your body hugs mine 
You sleep and you insist on holding me to your chest
The way you love me 
I have never been so important to someone. 
He is my Scotsman 
I am his Spanish cortisone. 
He loves me. 
I love him. 
I can't believe I'm so lucky 
To find someone as special as you.

The-war-underneath

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misadventuresofcrow

Three things I noticed:

1. I'm pretty sure "cortisone" isn't the word you want.
2. How can someone hold you to your own chest? (second line)
3. You shift back and forth between speaking TO him ("The way you love me") and ABOUT him ("I love him"). If it's intentional, that's one thing, but it feels a bit shoddy and inconsistent.

Love poetry isn't my cup of tea, and there's not much depth in your treatment of it here, but you come across as sincere and unpretentious and I appreciate that.