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it was stronger than anything i ever felt before i saw your soul and after that everything was a blur when i was with you time seemed to slow down and everything was moving in slow motion the only thing i knew was that you were the most amazing creature I've ever met i literally felt week in the knees every time you looked at me yes, you were a mess, i could feel that and I, for the first time in my life, wasn't i could feel your mess taking over me but i couldn't care less, it felt amazing like a magical mess, it made me feel more alive than ever
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Aug 7, 2014
Aug 7, 2014 at 12:41 AM UTC
Magical Mess
it was stronger than anything i ever felt before i saw your soul and after that everything was a blur when i was with you time seemed to slow down and everything was moving in slow motion the only thing i knew was that you were the most amazing creature I've ever met i literally felt week in the knees every time you looked at me yes, you were a mess, i could feel that and I, for the first time in my life, wasn't i could feel your mess taking over me but i couldn't care less, it felt amazing like a magical mess, it made me feel more alive than ever
venusandthemoon
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Aug 7, 2014
Aug 7, 2014 at 12:41 AM UTC
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