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When I’m gone will you remember the way you read my eyes like an open book of emotions full of love, packed with desires filled with passion, bare of pretensions? will you remember my laughter, my smiles even my tears that won’t let me hide any lies, purging the storms within, saving myself from drowning? will you remember how my stares made you feel as it strokes your body in our own free will riding in the ripples of desire and the love we acquire? And when I’m gone will you remember my unselfish love the way I opened up to you giving what I am capable of unleashing everything that is hidden expressing the words unwritten Because when I’m gone I will remember you my one and only true. 8.7.14
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Aug 6, 2014
Aug 6, 2014 at 9:55 PM UTC
When I'm Gone
When I’m gone will you remember the way you read my eyes like an open book of emotions full of love, packed with desires filled with passion, bare of pretensions? will you remember my laughter, my smiles even my tears that won’t let me hide any lies, purging the storms within, saving myself from drowning? will you remember how my stares made you feel as it strokes your body in our own free will riding in the ripples of desire and the love we acquire? And when I’m gone will you remember my unselfish love the way I opened up to you giving what I am capable of unleashing everything that is hidden expressing the words unwritten Because when I’m gone I will remember you my one and only true. 8.7.14
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Aug 6, 2014
Aug 6, 2014 at 9:55 PM UTC
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