Would anyone who reads my poems (if they have time) please get in touch with some constructive criticism? Any positives or negatives would be greatly appreciated to help improve my scribbles. 

Thanks guys!

Grez x

grez

I need criticism!

Jun 4, 2026

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Anger & Conflict - June 2026

Beauty & Aesthetics - June 2026

Dark & Scary - June 2026

Death & Mortality - June 2026

Drama & Tragedy - June 2026

Family & Relationships - June 2026

Fantasy & Magical - June 2026

Happiness & Joy - June 2026

Heartbreak & Loss - June 2026

Historical & Ancient - June 2026

Hope & Optimism - June 2026

Humor & Satire - June 2026

Inspiration & Motivation - June 2026

Love & Romance - June 2026

Mystery & Supernatural - June 2026

Nature & Environment - June 2026

Philosophical & Intellectual - June 2026

Political & Social - June 2026

Sadness & Melancholy - June 2026

Sexy & Sensual - June 2026

Time & Nostalgia - June 2026

Transformation & Change - June 2026

War & Heroism - June 2026

World & Travel - June 2026

antonio

"If your stuff is great,
    I'll hate you cuz it isn't mine.
If your stuff stinks,
    I'll hate you for wasting my time."

I'm paraphrasing Hemingway.  He basically suggests not to seek advice from your competition (i.e. other writer's)  It's good advice.  You will know what's good and what is not in due course.  Good luck, Grez.

LouiseMcKay

Just keep writing and day by day you'll just improve naturally.
Read the work of others and be inspired ( basically nick a few ideas, style, structure )
: )

Gaffer

I like scribbles, some artists make millions out of them.